You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

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Dear

customer service manager

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Customer Service Manager

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I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with your hotel room.

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you told me top quality and cost of 1 bedroom which is

perefectly

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perfectly

soutable

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suitable

for my budget. But, I felt that the room I received was well below the standard I expected. There is one major issue is

that

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dripping water from

tap

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the tap

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in the washroom. I had

conference

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a conference

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in today's morning and I didn't

perfomed

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performed

perform

extremely

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well as I prepared

due to

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the bad sleep

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last

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night and behind

this

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matter there is only one reason which I mentioned above. I like to take peaceful and deep sleep But, I

couldn't

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able to take even

single

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a single

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nap

too

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either

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, I told your

receptionsit

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receptionist

for

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switch the

room

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rooms

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but, she

had

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not any option for it. I would like to inform you to take serious action for

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matter As soon as possible. Our office employees frequently stay at your hotel. If you can not take any serious action

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I will have no choice but to

canel

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cancel

our next booking in your hotel. I hope that you will deal with

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matter promptly as it is causing me considerable

inconvience

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inconvenience

. Best regards.

ururangholiyaFri Nov 08 2024

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coherence

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greeting closing

The letter includes a greeting and a closing, which contributes to the overall structure and professionalism.

tone

The tone of the letter is appropriate for formal communication, reflecting politeness despite expressing dissatisfaction.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

203 words

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