You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

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Dear

customer service manager

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Customer Service Manager

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I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with your hotel room.

Although

you told me top quality and cost of 1 bedroom which is

perefectly

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perfectly

soutable

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suitable

for my budget. But, I felt that the room I received was well below the standard I expected. There is one major issue is

that

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dripping water from

tap

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the tap

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in the washroom. I had

conference

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a conference

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in today's morning and I didn't

perfomed

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performed

perform

extremely

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well as I prepared

due to

the bad sleep

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last

night and behind

this

matter there is only one reason which I mentioned above. I like to take peaceful and deep sleep But, I

couldn't

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able to take even

single

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a single

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nap

too

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either

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Also

, I told your

receptionsit

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receptionist

for

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switch the

room

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rooms

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but, she

had

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not any option for it. I would like to inform you to take serious action for

this

matter As soon as possible. Our office employees frequently stay at your hotel. If you can not take any serious action

Unless

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I will have no choice but to

canel

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cancel

our next booking in your hotel. I hope that you will deal with

this

matter promptly as it is causing me considerable

inconvience

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inconvenience

. Best regards.

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coherence

Enhance coherence by using more transitional phrases to smoothly connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

greeting closing

The letter includes a greeting and a closing, which contributes to the overall structure and professionalism.

tone

The tone of the letter is appropriate for formal communication, reflecting politeness despite expressing dissatisfaction.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

203 words

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