Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that we should limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite these warnings, many people do not do this. What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?
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introduce
this
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to preserve environment
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energy
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electricity
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governments
government
campaignes
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reducing
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energy
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consumption
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energy
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