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Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that we should limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite these warnings, many people do not do this. What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?

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Preserving our
surrounding
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surroundings
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 by constraining the usage of
energy
 has been constantly
adviced
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advised
 by many scientists; still, some
peple
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people
 neglect and continue using the
energy
 in their
evry day
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everyday
 lives.
This
 essay will
introduse
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introduce
 reasons for
this
 behaviour and present solutions for persuading
people
 to preserve
environment
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the environment
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.
Firstly
, it is claimed
that
is
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in
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 some
counties
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countries
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 the cost of
enery
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energy
entry
 is low;
thus
, many
people
 can afford
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to use
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 more
then
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than
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of
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their needs.
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Furthermore
, in recent
decats
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decades
 the number of appliances working with
energy
 has
been
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increased;
therefore
,
an
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 growing number of households using these appliances.
This
 leads
people
 to use more
energy
 in their daily lives.
For example
,in Iran, many
householdes
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households
householders
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use
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 dish machines, using
electerisity
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electricity
 and water.
Moreover
,
governmnts
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governments
government
 can establish some
campaignes
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campaigns
campaigners
 in order to encourage
people
 to take action to protect the environment.
This
campaignes
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campaign
campaigns
 should raise
awarness
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awareness
 about
impacts
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the impacts
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, caused by overconsumption of
enery
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energy
, and convince
people
 to use
energy
 in moderation.
Additionally
, for those
redusing
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reducing
 their
energy
 usage governments should consider a reward like
tax
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a tax
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 cut.
This
 persuades individuals
lessen
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to lessen
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energy
consumtion
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consumption
.
For instance
, a scheme could be
introdused
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introduced
 by
government
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the government
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 to track and calculate the
energy
 consumption per household in order to set off
aginst
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against
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 tax. In conclusion, there are several justifications for overlooking the
experts
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expert's
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 warnings by
people
 and the need for
energy
perservation
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preservation
 like low-cost
energy
 that persuade them to exceed their needs and rise in
invention
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the invention
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 of new appliances
runed
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run
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 by
energy
.
Also
, it is the governments that are able to encourage
people
 to care about protecting the
environmet
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environment
 by establishing campaigns
for informing
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to inform
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 them about
consequences
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the consequences
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 of their actions and considering prase for
thoes
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those
 who
deduce
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reduce
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 their
energy
consumtion
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consumption
.
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