The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts two potential areas for establishing a new school in the town of Canterbury.
Overal
, at a Correct your spelling
Overall
glane
at the map, it is clear where are Correct your spelling
glance
this
2 provided spots. one of them is located Correct determiner usage
these
at
the downtown and other one is Correct word choice
apply
placed
Verb problem
located
at
a suburb.
Let's begin by looking at the S1 site, Change preposition
in
this
possible an
area is suited Correct article usage
apply
at
the northeast of Change preposition
to
the
Canterbury Correct article usage
apply
where
is in the countryside and Correct word choice
which
this
area is nearby
the surry where their population are 7,000 and their distance to Correct your spelling
near
this
zone are
5km.
Turning to the S2 site, to Change the verb form
is
contrary
the S2, Correct your spelling
contrast
this
possible an
area is located at the Correct article usage
apply
approximately
town Change the adverb
approximate
center
where at Change the spelling
centre
that
adjacent to Chartham with Correct determiner usage
apply
4,500
population. Correct article usage
a 4,500
moreover
main roads run through two zones. Add a comma
moreover,
However
two zones are far away Add a comma
However,
the
university.Change preposition
from the
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