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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map depicts two potential areas for establishing a new school in the town of Canterbury.
Overal
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, at a
glane
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glance
 at the map, it is clear where are
this
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these
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 2 provided spots. one of them is located
at
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the downtown and other one is
placed
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located
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at
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in
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 a suburb. Let's begin by looking at the S1 site,
this
 possible
an
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area is suited
at
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to
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 the northeast of
the
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Canterbury
where
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which
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 is in the countryside and
this
 area is
nearby
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near
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 the surry where their population are 7,000 and their distance to
this
 zone
are
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 5km. Turning to the S2 site, to
contrary
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contrast
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 the S2,
this
 possible
an
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area is located at the
approximately
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 town
center
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centre
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 where at
that
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adjacent to Chartham with
4,500
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a 4,500
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 population.
moreover
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moreover,
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 main roads run through two zones.
However
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 two zones are far away
the
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from the
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 university.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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