Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: ● Explain the problem ● Suggest a solution ● Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter regarding no parking in our

office

bulding

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building

out side

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outside

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Firstly

, I have to inform

our

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you our

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problem

that is

there are 50 officers

are

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working in our

office

while

30 officers have

vhicles

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vehicles

that are cars and

moter

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motor

bick

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brick

. when they come to

office

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the office

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they are facing lots of problems. not

enagh

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enough

our in front of

office

place therefor,

sombody

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somebody

statnt

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status

stent

vhicle

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vehicle

out of

side

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. when they

stant

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start

out side

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outside

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there

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their

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vhicle

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vehicle

thay

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they

are facing

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unexpectent

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unexpected

problems.

secondly

, I

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with our officers

they

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and they

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are

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said have to

this

peoblem

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problem

very soon. I have one of idea our

office

behind has one of privet land. If our compny get legelly. we can

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solve

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this

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peoblems

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problems

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therefore

, If you

are

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agree

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this

solution. I can manage

this

case.

lastly

, If we solve

this

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problem

our staff will

come

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unstrsful

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unstressful

and when they come to

office

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the office

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whom

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who

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can

will

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save time and we can get more

efficency

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efficient

work

form

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from

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our

sttaf

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staff

. I kindly

requasts

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requests

request

and expect your

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comments

soon. Yours Faithfully Raam

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
40Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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