Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: ● Explain the problem ● Suggest a solution ● Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

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letter regarding no parking in our

office

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bulding

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building

out side

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outside

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Firstly

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, I have to inform

our

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you our

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problem

that is

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there are 50 officers

are

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apply

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working in our

office

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while

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30 officers have

vhicles

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vehicles

that are cars and

moter

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motor

bick

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brick

. when they come to

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office

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the office

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they are facing lots of problems. not

enagh

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enough

our in front of

office

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place therefor,

sombody

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somebody

statnt

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status

stent

vhicle

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vehicle

out of

side

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the side

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. when they

stant

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start

out side

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outside

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there

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their

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vhicle

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vehicle

thay

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they

are facing

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face

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unexpectent

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unexpected

problems.

secondly

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, I

was talk

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was talking

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with our officers

they

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and they

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are

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apply

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said have to

this

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peoblem

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problem

very soon. I have one of idea our

office

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behind has one of privet land. If our compny get legelly. we can

slove

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solve

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this

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these

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peoblems

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problems

problem

therefore

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, If you

are

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agree

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agree

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agree on

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this

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solution. I can manage

this

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case.

lastly

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, If we solve

this

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promlem

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problem

our staff will

come

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unstrsful

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unstressful

and when they come to

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office

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the office

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whom

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who

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can

will

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apply

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save time and we can get more

efficency

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efficient

work

form

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from

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our

sttaf

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staff

. I kindly

requasts

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requests

request

and expect your

commants

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comments

soon. Yours Faithfully Raam

Sat Nov 09 2024

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language

Work on improving grammar and spelling to enhance clarity and readability.

structure

Ensure each paragraph clearly presents and supports a single idea to improve coherence.

task response

The letter provides a clear explanation of the problem and suggests a viable solution.

tone

The writer uses polite language to effectively communicate with the manager.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: ● Explain the problem ● Suggest a solution ● Say why parking will benefit all employees

Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

Some people think that there could be more benefits to society if more people study business than history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?