Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: ● Explain the problem ● Suggest a solution ● Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Manager,
I have a big
problem
and I think about this
problem
in my opinion you solving this
problem
.
I do not
find a Verb problem
cannot
park
for my car because our office building does not have a
parking available.
Remove the article
apply
this
is a big problem
. I do not use public transport because I have to be at work
early.
I must be go
to Change the verb form
go
work
to
my car. I usually spend time for parking 30 minutes. I do not Change preposition
in
find
a car Verb problem
have
park
so I have to park
far from the office and I run because If I do not run I am late.
This
problem
occurs every morning so I do
not Verb problem
am
motivate
Replace the word
motivated
work
because I come to Fix the infinitive
to work
work
stressed in the morning. You want to
me to Change preposition
apply
productive
but I Add a missing verb
be productive
do
not productive for Verb problem
am
this
stress.
In my opinion
there is empty land opposite our office but since Add a comma
opinion,
this
area is common
area, employees of other offices Add an article
a common
the common
park
their cars. If our takes a part of that area, employees will not have any problems with parking.
Kind regards,Submitted by kubrairmak287 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider using paragraphs to separate your explanation, suggestion, and reason for the benefit. Grouping related information together can improve readability.
Task Achievement
Try to clarify your solution proposal. You mentioned taking a part of the area, but the details on how this could be arranged would strengthen your point.
Task Achievement
Although the tone is quite personal, ensure formal language is maintained throughout for such letters.
Task Achievement
The letter effectively identifies the problem (lack of parking) and describes the personal impact.
Coherence and Cohesion
A friendly and respectful closing maintains good rapport with the recipient.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.