The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

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line graph shows which

way

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of transportation

ways

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was

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used in 1974-2002 in the UK.

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Road

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transportation is higher than others.

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water

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waterway

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way

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and

Rail

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way

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same

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rate in 1975.

Secondly

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Road

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the Road

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transportation method

is creasing

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creased

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little

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a little

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bit in 1980

Although

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, Pipline and Water

transportations

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transportation

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are increasing,

but

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apply

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Rail

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way

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simillar

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similar

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road

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the road

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way

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ways

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they

creased

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increased

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in 1980. Lines are around 20-80 million tonnes. Thirtly, all lines look

same

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the same

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rote in 1985. All of them

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are so

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stabile

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stable

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. on the top of the

list

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list,

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Road

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Roadway

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way

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is still same place, and

Pipline

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Pipeline

too. Rates are between 80-20 million

tones

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tonnes

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, the graph

is follow

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follows

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same

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the same

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number on the graph. We can't notice any changes on the chart.

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Although

Rail

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way

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is rise

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rose

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down in 1990 - 1995.

Finnaly

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Finally

, the

Road

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line is around 80-100.

Water

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The water

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rate is over

than

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apply

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60 million tonnes, but

Rail

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and Pipeline stabile in the chart.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words way, road, rail with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Transported goods
Quantities
Trends
Modes of transport
Rail
Road
Water
Pipeline
Fluctuations
Predominance
Economic influences
Societal changes
Technological advancements
Environmental impact
Growth
Steady increase/decrease
Comparison
Period (e.g., decade, years)
Examination
Implications
Analysis
Conclusion

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