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The bar chart below shows of expeditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below shows of expeditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
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The bar chart compares the five different aspects of capital and recurrent expenditure rates of America,
Canada
,
the
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 Great Britain, and
Japan
 during the year
of
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2019.
Overall
,it can be seen that mainly had been spent on food,housing construction, and transportation,
while
 healthcare and clothing had been paid
at a least
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 percentage by all of the four countries.
To begin
 with,
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united states
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 served with 25% for constructing accommodation,
while
Canada
 had funded
for
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that
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of
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just
with
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over one-fifth ,
whereas
 it was
the
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Canada
's largest proportion ever in
expending
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 in 2019.
However
,
Japan
 had offered
with
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approximately 23% for food items,
while
 only the United Kindom allocated one-fifth.
Then
,in the transmission
services
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 20% had been budgeted by
Canada
,in comparison half of that
of
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had been spent by
Japan
.
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,
a
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 less amount of funds were given for
uniform
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and
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textile,and medical sectors by all
the
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four governments,which
always
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 less than one-tenth.Nearly 7% had been allowed by
United
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 States for medical requirements,
whereas
other
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 three legimates allowed
lesser
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 than 5%. The Fabric sector had been sponsored
roughly
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with
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5% only by
Canada
,the United Kindom, and
Japan
.
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