The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph visually represents how many international visitors went to three types of areas, namely the coast,
lakes
and mountains in Europe.
Moreover
, the data were recorded over the 20-year period from the year 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, we saw an upward trend in two lines, which meant there were significant differences between the initial and
last
numbers.
Additionally
, the interest in the mountains didn’t change for 2 decades.
To begin
with, the number of hikers who visited
mountains
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were
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20000 and
this
figure gradually climbed to 30000 until 1997, stayed the same for 5 years and slightly rose to 35000 from the year 2002 to 2007. People visiting the
lakes
and coast were 10000 and 40000 respectively in 1987. It was observed a sharp increase for 15 years in the number of tourists to the
lakes
.
Likewise
, the identical flow was noticed in visiting coasts from the year 1992 to 2007,
while
for five years, until 1992 the number dwindled to approximately 38000 from 40000. Turning to the quantity of visitors travelling the
lakes
diminished to 50000 from the highest point which was 75000.
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