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The bar chart below shows of expeditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below shows of expeditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of spending in five important sections namely food, housing, transportation,
health
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care
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, and clothing in four countries in
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2009.
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 it can be seen that food and housing were the significant percentage of spending
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, healthcare and clothing were the lowest proportion of expending. On the one hand, housing was the biggest
number
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 in all countries and the US was the highest
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 of spending around 26%
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, in
food
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 sector was the least preferred approximately 14%.
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 to that Japan
almost
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 the same
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number of
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expenditure in both categories which was between 22%- 23%.
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, the least spent
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 were in
the
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health
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care
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 and clothing. US was almost 6% in
health
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care
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while
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,
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 in clothing was the least one.
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,
United
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 Kingdom
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 around 5% of spending
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, in
health
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care
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 declined to
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3%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words health, care, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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