The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the uk for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents the number of foreign
visitors
in the UK and their purpose for visiting in the period between 1989 and 2009.
The purposes stated by visitors
are namely for the holidays, for business and, for meeting with friends and family.
Overall
, there has been a rising trend in the number of visitors
in the past 20 years in the UK with numbers peaking in the year 2009. Moreover
, celebrating the holidays in the United Kingdom has been consistently the top purpose for going into the country in the aforementioned years has the figure reaching 9 million. However
, the number of people visiting for the holidays sharply decreased in 1994 but steadily increased starting in 2004.
Meanwhile, Business-related visits have been steadily increasing in the count since 1998. Its numbers peaked in 2008 reaching 8 million visitors
. Similarly
, reunions with friends and family also
have a steady rise in figures. Although
it the least accounted for purpose by visitors
with figures only reaching 7 million.Submitted by erickacasandra.abas on
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