The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the proportion of four different
transportation
that people in the UK used over a period
of 40 years
.Private cars, public transportation
,recreational vehicles, and commercial vehicles were used by the UK's residents over the period
.
According to
the pie chart, private cars were the most popular transportation
among citizens. The second place was taken by public transportation
, except in 1985 when the portions of public transportation
and lorries were at the same amount.
Over the period
, the percentage of people that used their own car increased dramatically. At the beginning of the period
it was used by 40% of residents , and it rose by around 10% every 20 years
.
Additionally
, public transportation
was used at approximately the same portion at around 20 to 25%.
Commuting with lorries in contrast
varied over the period
. In the first 20 years
, it was used by 20% of people while
the number fell to around 10%. On the other hand
, recreational transportation
was completely opposite. In the first 20 years
it was used by almost 15%, while
the portions changed at around 5% and 8% in 1985 and 2005 respectively.Submitted by rozakoohvand on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, period, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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