The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the uk for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following line graph illustrates the total proportion of foreign travellers who arrived
to
England for distinct aims in the 20-year period of time from 1989 to 2009. Units are measured in millions.
Looking from an Change preposition
in
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that people who came to the UK for vacation was the highest number in the data, on the other hand
, business was the lowest one. As for holiday
, it showed stabilization from the beginning to the end.
Correct article usage
the holiday
According to
the figure, holiday
started from slightly above 6 Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
million
to peak at 9 million
in 1999, declined gradually to 6 which this
number rise
to 9 Wrong verb form
rose
million
in the end. Likewise
, business stood at 5 million
at first to climb significantly by exactly 3 million
in 2009 except for a little decrease in the final year surveyed.
As for remaining, meeting
and relatives began from just over 3 Replace the word
meetings
million
to increase
constantly by about 4 Wrong verb form
increased
million
in 2009 and fell to 6 million
in the last
year.Submitted by Zolboo on
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