The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in China in four periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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bar chart

illustrates the number of individuals who studies on part-

time

and full-

time

higher

education

in China.

While

the average

of

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women

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, the average

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is black.

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, it is presented that, the

overall

average of part-

time

education

among both men and

women

, was significantly higher

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to full-

time

education

between 1970

to

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1991.

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, the average of

women

who studied both part-

time

and full-

time

during

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1990

to1991

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to 1991

are

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the highest, the lowest average was related to

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time

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part-

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time

education

by

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approximately

100,000 and

near

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800,000

person

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,

prespectively

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respectively

.

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,

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,

in

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1980 to 1981 the average of

female

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a female

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generation who studied full-

time

was a bit

of

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higher than 200,000, the

women

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who studied part-

time

was about 800,000

person

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.

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the

most

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highest average of men who studied

full-

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full-time

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time

was a

littel

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little

above 200,000

during

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1990 to 1991, the highest average

of

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for

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part-

time

education

was 1000,000

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in 1970 and 1971. It is noticeable that

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between 1980 to 1981 the average of

male

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a male

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generation who studied

part-

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part-time

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time

was decreased

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to 1990 and 1991.