WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent years, many people think there
are
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some merit to the argument
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whether it is appropriate to exclude men or
women
from certain
professions
based on perceived general differences in strengths and witnesses. In
this
essay, my perspective is to consider
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both
sides of the argument
along with
relevant examples and a balanced view. Some people believe that it is better to exclude based on
gender
in certain
case
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.There are some physical demands in specific
professions
, some jobs,
for example
, certain roles in construction, military or firefighting require extreme physical strength and endurance.
While
female
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is
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satisfied with those standards, some argue that
male
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males
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have
a
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physical advantages that
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with
this
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demands.
However
, it is important to note that some
women
do meet these requirements, so exclusion solely on
gender
may not be justified. One
counter argument
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is that allowing
both
genders equal access to
professions
.Individual abilities
needs
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over stereotypes.Strengths and weaknesses vary widely among individuals, Regardless of
gender
. There are plenty of men and
women
have skills that allow them to excel in any profession. To illustrate,
while
nursery
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is often seen as a female-dominated field,
but
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as evidence shows many men are highly successful and emphatic nurses.
Additionally
, Promotes diversity and innovation. Allowing
both
gender
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in all
professions
promotes a diverse workplace, leading to different
perspective
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perspectives
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and
innovation
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solutions. In fields like engineering or science, having
women
on
team
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can add viewpoints that might
otherwise
be overlooked in a male-dominated environment.
Thus
there are
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of benefits for allowing
both
genders equal access to
professions
. In conclusion,
it is clear that
to assess individuals based on their qualifications and capabilities rather than
gender
.
While
certain roles may have physical or cultural considerations, the decision to exclude one agenda from a profession should be approached cautiously and with respect for people's skills and rights.Society benefits most when one
have
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equal access to opportunities
provide
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, they meet
necessary
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the necessary
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requirements for the job.
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coherence cohesion
Refine the logical structure by organizing arguments and examples systematically. Ensure each paragraph discusses a distinct point or counterpoint.
task achievement
Clarify and elaborate on your ideas for improved understanding. Make sure every argument is thoroughly developed with examples and explanations.
coherence cohesion
The essay includes a clear introduction and conclusion, summarizing the writer's stance effectively.
task achievement
The writer attempts to address both sides of the argument, which reflects an understanding of the complexity of the issue.

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