The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The
salmon
fish has small
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a small
life
cycle
, that
there are only three main features on it. Fry, smolt and adult Correct word choice
and
salmon
are the parts of the salmon
life
cycle
. However
, every part
, the
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of the
salmon
will have another size and look.
When the salmon
is in the first part
of the cycle
, it called
fry, and it is the smallest and youngest Add a missing verb
is called
part
of the salmon
life
. A few years later, it turned into a smolt, wich
the Correct your spelling
which
salmon
became when it is
between 12-15 cm tall. The Wrong verb form
was
last
part
and the biggest called adult salmon
, and in
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apply
this
time the salmon
will be 70-76 cm tall.
Finally
, I would like to say that every part
of the salmon
life
cycle
has a different time, place and size and that make
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makes
this
cycle
easy and small, because it has only three parts.Submitted by axik070 on
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