Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

Dear Manager, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you regarding my current duties in the company. My name is Disha. I have been living in India for the past five years.

Additionally

, I am working with

the

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multinational company in the IT sector.

Also

, I am the senior manager. As I know about all the work, I applied for

international

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an international

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position because when I did read about the job duties mentioned in the job bank is the same as I am doing presently.

Furthermore

, if I tell you about the duties, I have to look after every employee and tackle the

quries

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queries

which

was

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created by the workers.

Besides

this

, I have to make a schedule for employee

according to

their performance. I would like to tell you that I will be best at

job

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my job

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. Because my qualities

are

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apply

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match

with

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all the traits you posted on the website. And I have been in

this

company for four years.

Therefore

, I have a good experience in

this

field. I look forward to

positive

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response from your side. Yours Sincerely, Disha

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coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction and conclusion.

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Addressed all parts of the task, discussing current duties and why you're suitable for the job.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

ome people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In many countries government are investing on new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening. Do you think this is an approciate use of government money?

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Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?