The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates
men
and
women
from Australia who participated in regular physical
activity
who are in different ranges of
age
in 2010. Generally,
it is clear that
there are 6
age
groups
that compare the amount of
activity
between
men
and
women
. It can be seen in 4
groups
there are differences between
men
's and
women
's
activity
that
women
are more active compared to
men
. In one of the
groups
the number of
men
is more than
women
and
also
in the latest group, the number is almost equal. As we can see, some
groups
have a higher percentage of
men
are more than
women
. In 25 to 34, we are wetness 42.2% and 48.9% for male and female, respectively. From 35 to 44 proportion of
activity
for males declined to 39.5% and for females increased to 52.5%. Both genders were more active in the
age
range of 45 to 54 than their previous
age
and they reached 43.1 and 53.3% for male and female, respectively. In 55 to 64
men
’s
activity
has grown by 2% and for
women
it has decreased by 0.3%.
However
, as shown in the first group, males had more regular physical
activity
in 2010 than females, 53.8% and 47.7%, respectively. In the
last
group, 65 and over, we can see approximately the
activity
of
women
and
men
, that 0.4% of
women
are more than
men
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activity, age, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Percentage
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participation
  • Age group
  • Trend
  • Significant
  • Notable
  • Gender gap
  • Comparative analysis
  • Consistent
  • Decline
  • Progressive
  • Conversely
  • Motivations
  • Barriers
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