The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides key information about the amounts of guests in various London museums during summer vacations in 2013.The unit is measured in thousands of visitors.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the last
month witnessed Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
increase in all museums. Change the word
sharp
In addition
, British
Correct article usage
the British
Museum
has the highest number of guests thought
the vacation ,Correct your spelling
throughout
whereas
Science
Correct article usage
the Science
Museum
was
the lowest one.
Verb problem
has
According to
what is shown, National
History Correct article usage
the National
Museum
and British Museum
started from closes
figures in June. Replace the word
close
While
the British climbed 150 thousand in July then
dropped until reached 500 thousand. National History Museum
decreased from 550 to 380 then
increased slightly to 390.Finally
both of them increased Add a comma
Finally,
in
Change preposition
by
same
amount.
In terms of the red line, Change the article
the same
firstly
achieved 400000. Secondly
it declined to 37000 visitors. Add a comma
Secondly,
Thirdly
it continues decreased
to 300000.As all in Change the verb form
to decrease
September
it rose 150 thousandAdd a comma
September,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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