You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university’s notice board.  Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing to you to apply for

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the position

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of Quality Assurance Manager that was listed on the notice board of

university

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the university

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. I am currently studying Business Administration as a full-time student in my third year at Loren Brusque

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. Two years back, I managed to grab a job, as an assistant

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Quality

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a Quality

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Assurance Manager. Fortunately, got promoted

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Manager

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year because of my good skills, knowledge and work. That means I have experience

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in

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job for more than 6 months. As said about the experience and abilities above, I think I am

good

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a good

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fit for

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role.

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, I would be happy if you

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consider me for

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offer.

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I can be contacted through email or

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number provided above for any kind

query

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or an interview.

Lastly

, I will be waiting to hear back from you. Regards Soojana