The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The bar chart given describes the total
ammount
of money spent among different European countries throughout the years 2002, 2007 and 2012, measured as percentages of GDP, Gross Domestic Product.
Correct your spelling
amount
Overall
, it can be seen that no significant changes were experienced among
these three years. Lithuania, Slovenia, Poland, Change preposition
during
norway
and Denmark saw a slight increase in the value registered towards the Change the capitalization
Norway
last
year, whereas
France, Luxembourg and The Netherlands described a downward trend. The remaining countries consistenly
reported the same figures.
Belgium, Correct your spelling
consistently
Stonia
, Spain and Switzerland saw no variation Correct your spelling
Estonia
on
the GDP over time. Throughout the three years they accounted for over 10%, 4%, 8% and 11%, respectively.
Denmark, Lithuania, Norway, Poland and Slovenia depicted higher figures over time and, in 2012, they reported 10%, 6%, 10%, 7% and 9%, compared to 9%, 5%, 9%, 6% and 8%, in 2002, Change preposition
in
repectively
. Correct your spelling
respectively
In contrast
, France, Luxembourg and The Netherlands scaled back in 2012, recording 9%, 7% and 8% in 2012. France was the only country which peaked in 2007, describing 11% GDP.Submitted by dar.rodriguez.ramos on
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