The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. айша Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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amount of individuals who smoked cigarettes in Britain during the

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2011 to 2021.

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,it is evident that men smoked more cigarettes per year than

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over 10

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.

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,in both

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the number of cigarettes smoked

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decreased throughout the period. From 2011 to 2015,men and

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was dramatically decrease

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.In 2011, the number of men who smoked was around 4

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.Throughout the next 10

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,the

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of male smokers declined steadily,picking

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2

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in 2021. Meanwhile,the number of

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smokers

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plummeted in the next 10

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.Starting at 3.5

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in 2011 ,

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fell to approximately 1

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in 2021.

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,by the end of the period ,the gap between the amount of male and female smokers had decreased considerably.