IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

#minutes #week #flight #london #plane #bag #hotel #airline #contents #addresses #sir #madam
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Dear Sir or Madam,
This
 is with
regards
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 to my missing
bag
 which I unfortunately left on my
fight
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flight
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 to
london
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London
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 with your
airlines
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airline
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. My flight was on the 23rd of November and
i
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I
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 was seated in 20D. I was carrying two cabin luggage and one
hand
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handbag
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bag
. During the deboarding process,
i
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I
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 forgot about the second cabin
bag
 which
i
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I
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 had to keep near 25C
due to
 space issues. It wasn't until I reached my hotel that
i
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I
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 realised my mistake. I tried calling the
airlines
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airline's
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 service
center
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centre
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however
i
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I
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 could not get any satisfactory response. The missing
bag
 is from the brand Guess and is
cabin
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a cabin
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bag
 in black leather. I was carrying
few
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a few
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 of my clothes and two sets of Nike running show which were of
same
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 model but red and blue in colour. Hope
this
 helps in finding the
bag
. Kindly flag it to the correct team and once found please share the information to my registered phone number,
i
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I
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 will come and
pickup
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pick up
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 the
bag
 from
airport
Add an article
the airport
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 itself. Thank you
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your paragraphs have a single, clear idea. This will enhance readability and coherence.
task achievement
Make sure to include all necessary details, such as your flight number, to make it easier for the airline to locate your bag.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and appropriate tone throughout, which is suitable for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear, logical progression of ideas from explaining the problem to describing the bag and then stating the desired action.
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