Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about this?

Rearranging the
job
area and
own
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owning
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house
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a house
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are
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really essential
as well as
cleaning and
put
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putting
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the
right
thing in
right
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the right
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place
also
important, a few people say that. I totally agree with
this
statement because it makes a
stress free
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stress-free
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life and can
focus
at
work
without
discruction
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disruption
distraction
destruction
. Neat and clean places always make a
person
’s life easy. If a
job
place
is clean and organized
then
it is easy to just
focus
on the current
job
.
Unorganized
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An unorganized
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place
always breaks the concentration from
work
.
For example
, a study
shown
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showed
has shown
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that when a
person
organized their desk at
work
they can complete their
job
on time
than
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but
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who does not do that
.
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Placing files, documents and stuff in the
right
place
is making a
person
stress free
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stress-free
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. When people
focus
to
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on
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work
then
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apply
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if they need to search the documents
then
it
makes
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overwhelms
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the
person
overwhelmed
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apply
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.
As a result
, often they
got
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get
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distracted and can’t complete their
job
correctly.
For instance
, if a customer
ask
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asks
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for a completed project
files
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file
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or important document and
job
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the job
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person
cannot find it
right
away it is always bad for
business
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the business
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or reputation. In conclusion, it says by some humans that not only putting your documents in the
right
place
is important but
also
a clean and organized living
place
and
job
area are essential. I
agreed
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agree
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that because to
focus
on
job
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the job
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and make life
stress
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stress-free
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free
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apply
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people need
this
.
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