you ordered an item from online shop three weeks ago. The shop said you would get the item two days later but you have not received it yet Last week you sent an email about the situation to rhe shop,but you did not receive a reply. write a letterto the manager. In the letter explain the situaruon complain about the bad service ask for the immediate deliver of your order or your money back

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Dear sir, I am inscribing

this

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missive to tell you about the parcel that I ordered from your shop but

have

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has

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still not arrived. I

order

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the

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pair of sandals from your online website and I have

paidfull

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paid a full

price for that as well. It has been more than 25 days but

parcel

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the parcel

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have

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has

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still not arrived which

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is sechuduled

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sechuduled

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scheduled

to be delivered two days after placing the

order

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. I

have

Unnecessary verb

apply

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tried contacting

management

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the management

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of your shop

last

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week but I have not got any reply from them. It is almost a month since I placed the

order

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and it feels sometimes that I have been

scamed

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scammed

scared

by your website as no one

have

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has

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reverted

Unnecessary verb

apply

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back. I have

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order

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ordered

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the sandal for my cousin's marriage which is on

this

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weekend. If you are not able to deliver my

order

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this

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week,

than

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then

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I want

full

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a full

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refund. I hope that you will acknowledge my problem and take possible measures to resolve it. Yours Faithfully, Simranjot Kaur

Submitted by simrantiwana1086 on Thu Nov 14 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider splitting your concerns into separate paragraphs to make the structure clearer and enhance readability.

Task Achievement

Add more specific details about your order and the efforts you've made to resolve the issue to provide a complete response.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter appropriately opens with a greeting and closes with a polite sign-off, showing good format.

Task Achievement

You've expressed your complaint clearly, which demonstrates a suitable tone and achievement in addressing the task.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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