In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard.

It is true that during studying or at work, some people make more significant effort compared to their peers or colleagues. In

this

essay, I will present the main reason why

this

is happening and

then

go on to explain why, in my opinion,

this

approach is not always beneficial. As far as I am concerned, a particular share of people are trying harder because they have a great desire to achieve their

goal

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as fast as possible.

While

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way of working and studying is effective in most situations, there

is

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some

exception

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when people’s efforts are not rewarded. In conclusion, I consider that hard workers dedicate more

their

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time or efforts to their studying or working in order to achieve the desired result.

While

I understand that it is a good way in most situations, some

exception

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do

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