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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nrite at least 150 words. Goods transported in UK (1974-2002) 120 100 - road water .- rail pipeline 80 Million tonnes 60 40 20 0 1974 1978 1982 1986 1990 1994 1998 2002

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nrite at least 150 words. Goods transported in UK (1974-2002) 120 100 - road water .- rail pipeline 80 Million tonnes 60 40 20 0 1974 1978 1982 1986 1990 1994 1998 2002
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The line graph gives information about
amount
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 of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of
transport
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road
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, water, rail and pipeline.
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the graph
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graph
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graph,
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 it can clearly be seen that
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road
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 was the most used mode of
transport
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for
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over the period.
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contrary
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 pipeline is the least used
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 between 1974 and 2002.
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, transported goods by
road
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 started from 70 million tonnes and steadily increased to around 80 million tonnes in 1990, it remained stable during
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 four years, again
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 gradually until the end of the year.
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 the most used type of
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 was
water way
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waterway
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. Transported goods by water hit a peak of 65 million tonnes in 2002
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 difference compared to
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the road
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road way
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roadway
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.
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, Rail
transport
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fluctuate
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 over the years and
come
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 back to its initial price
at the end
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year
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 sharply grew between 1974 and 1982,
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 levelled off until 2002.
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