The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nrite at least 150 words. Goods transported in UK (1974-2002) 120 100 - road water .- rail pipeline 80 Million tonnes 60 40 20 0 1974 1978 1982 1986 1990 1994 1998 2002

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nrite at least 150 words.

Goods transported in UK (1974-2002)

120

100

- road

water .- rail

pipeline

80

Million tonnes

60

40

20

0

1974

1978

1982

1986

1990

1994

1998

2002
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of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of
transport
:
road
, water, rail and pipeline.
Overall
,
According to
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the graph
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graph
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graph,
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it can clearly be seen that
by
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road
was the most used mode of
transport
for
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over the period.
On the
contrary
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pipeline is the least used
transport
between 1974 and 2002.
Initially
, transported goods by
road
started from 70 million tonnes and steadily increased to around 80 million tonnes in 1990, it remained stable during
next
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four years, again
grow
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gradually until the end of the year.
Secon
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the most used type of
transport
was
water way
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waterway
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. Transported goods by water hit a peak of 65 million tonnes in 2002
as well as
there is
big
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a big
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difference compared to
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the road
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road way
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roadway
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.
Furthermore
, Rail
transport
fluctuate
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over the years and
come
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back to its initial price
at the end
of
year
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the year
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.
Also
, pipeline
transport
sharply grew between 1974 and 1982,
then
levelled off until 2002.
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