The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the outcomes of a survey conducted with 6,800 Scottish adults asking them about their participation in various cultural
activities
over the past 12 months.
Overall
, individuals aged 16 to 24 have the highest participation rates compared to other age groups.Moreover
, performance is the most common activity among all age groups.
Looking at specific activities
, writing and computer-based activities
were the least popular in all groups, with less than 10% taking part. People aged 45 to 74 were most likely to do craft activities
, with 22% of them participating. On the other hand
, people aged 16 to 24 were more likely to join in performances, with 35% taking part.
In addition
, crafts, cultural purchases, and visual arts attracted similar numbers of people. For the 16 to 24 age group, visual arts were the second most popular activity, with 30% participating just
performances.Change preposition
in just
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