These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss tge advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

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new relationships and country culture.

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alcohol and drugs which results in addiction.

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has more opportunities and benefits.

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The essay provides a balanced discussion of both advantages and disadvantages, which showcases an understanding of multiple perspectives.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

Culture shock
Immersion
Global network
Career prospects
Cultural appreciation
Language barriers
Financial strain
Visa and immigration regulations
Expatriate
Homesickness
International experience
Stereotypes

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