These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss tge advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
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On the other hand
, some people take advantage of travel in a bad way. it is also
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behaviours
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Moreover
, being away from home for a long time can cause homesickness because they can not live for a long time alone. for instance
, some researchers said that, if the human sits alone for months and years, he will develop mental and psychological illnesses .
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to this
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