The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. 

Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts compare data about the fraction of energy resources that the
USA
and the
UK
used at 2 points in time namely, 2000 and 2006.
Overall
, it was important that the main resources that
both
countries used were fossil fuels;
additionally
, the portion of energy that the
UK
used was more than the
USA
at
both
times.
According to
the diagrams, the percentages of Oil and Coal, the main sources of energy, roughly were the same
as
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other in 2000, owing to the fact that the
USA
hit nearly 35% and the
UK
reached almost 30%;
Then
Oil increased to 40% for the
USA
and 30% for Britania in 2006;
in contrast
, the Coal touched 35% and 30% in 2000 after that, it reduced to a quarter for the
USA
and 15% for the
UK
in 2006. At the start, Gas, which trend climbed for
both
countries, reported 20 and 15 per cent for the
UK
and the
USA
;
thereafter
, it jumped significantly to approximately 40 and 25 per cent for the
UK
and the
USA
in 2006. The graphs demonstrate that Nuclear power declined its proportion from 15 in 2000 to 10 in 2006 for the
UK
and 10 in 2000 to just under 10 in 2006 for the
USA
. In clean renewable sources, the percentage of the
UK
was almost the same in
both
times, but the
USA
fell from just over 5% in 2000 to 5% in 2006.
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