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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart provides key information about Australian exports the main features in
Japan
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, the US,
China
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 and
India
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. The units are measured in percentage.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that
China
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 had the highest rate in 2012.
In addition
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, in 2005
Japan
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 had the biggest per
cent
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 and
China
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 was under
Japan
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whereas
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, in 2010 it changed and
China
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 came higher than
Japan
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.
According to
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 what is shown, in 1990
India
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 and
China
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 were under 10 percent and nearly similar, the US was nearly 10% and
Japan
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 had the biggest percentage in 1990 at 25%. In terms of 2005, there was a significant change in all countries first
Japan
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's rate had dropped to less than 20 per
cent
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,
China
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 showed a significant increase, and
also
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India
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's percentage increased and for US Australian exports to per
cent
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 had a significant decrease. In 2012
Japan
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be
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had
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 the biggest rate and
the
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apply
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India
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 had less per
cent
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that
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than
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 the US.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, china, india, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • Percentage
  • Trend
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Comparison
  • Economic partnership
  • Trade policy
  • Geopolitical events
  • Global economic conditions
  • Period
  • Market share
  • Years specified
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