The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The pie graphs compare the percentages of British students who speak
other
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another language
other languages
language
in addition
to English at university in England between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
it can be seen that in both years the language
of Spanish was the most popular spoken by students whereas
, others language
less
preferred in 2010.
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were less
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with
in 2000 the largest sector was Add a comma
with,
Spanish
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the Spanish
language
comprised
30% Wrong verb form
comprising
then
in 2010 it witnessed Replace the word
than
increase
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an increase
on
5%. Change preposition
of
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According to
no other
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No Other Language
language
was at 20% in 2000 and then
decline
to ten Wrong verb form
declined
in
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apply
Moreover
another Add a comma
Moreover,
language
was a quarter in 2000 and then
rose at
20% in 2010.
The most interesting Change preposition
to
noticed
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notice
that
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is that
German
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the German
language
was the same percentage in both years formed at only 10%. Also
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Also,
French
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the French
language
was 15% in 2000 and in 2010 no one spoken
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spoke
this
language
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