The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the amount of
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grams
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of fish, beef, lamb and
chicken
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per person per week in a European country from 1979 to 2004. As can be seen, there was a considerable growth in the
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of
chicken
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in the 25-year period. As can be seen, both
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and lamb
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started at nearly 150
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per person per week,
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chicken
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consumption
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had an upward trend with a noticeable fluctuation of well over 250
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, lamb declined significantly by just over 50
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during
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period. After that, European
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consumed beef a lot in the first year, but it experienced a sharp drop before it hit a peak at roughly 250
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.
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, from 1979 to 2004 fish
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remained stable with a slight fluctuation,
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at
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it received to under 50
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per person per week
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was in lowest point
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of Europeans.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, chicken, consumption with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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