The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how the cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The phases and utensils used during cement production, which is an indispensable material for concrete creation are graphicly illustrated in the diagrams.
Overall
, manufacturing concrete requires several raw materials Linking Words
such
as sand, gravel, and water, Linking Words
however
, it Linking Words
also
consists of cement, which Linking Words
initially
has to go through the physical and thermic alterations indicated in the first picture.
The first diagram represents the modifications that must be undergone to limestone and clay to obtain the desired chemical substance. Linking Words
Firstly
, these compounds need to be crushed to the state of powder, Linking Words
secondly
, they go through a mixer resulting in a homogenous substance. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
this
mixture is heated up and ground leading to a fine, powdery cement. As for the concrete manufacture, the produced binder in the first stage is added to the mixture, with the purpose for other compounds to blend evenly, Linking Words
thus
, forming a uniform material.Linking Words
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