The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
cahrts
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charts
chart
illustrate the
amount
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number
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of
women
and
men
in someone Asian
contry
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country
who passed
theirs
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their
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driving
test
from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, the
precentage
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percentage
of driving tests
pssed
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passed
by
men
were
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was
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growing every ten years. Despite
this
, the
precentage
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percentage
of
women
who passed the driving
test
were
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was
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slightly
hight
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higher
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than
men
. The
women
who successfully passed the driving
test
in 1980 were just under 50
precentages
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per cent
,
that
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which
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was the lowest
figures
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figure
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of
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for
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women
in 30 years. After a
slightly
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slight
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rise in 1990, there was
increase
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an increase
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to the
hight
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height
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point of a little bit less than 70
precentages
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per cent
in 2000, before a
little
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small
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decline to slightly more than 60
precentage
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per cent
in 2010. In 1980,
men
's driving tests were passed by only under 30
precenatges
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percentages
percentage
,
then
in
1990
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1990,
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the indicator
growed
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grew
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up to just under 40
precentages
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percentages
percentage
and eventually the
precentages
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percentages
percentage
of
men
rised
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rose
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to the
hight
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high
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point
around
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of around
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50
precentages
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percentages
percentage
in 2000 and 2010 without any
chenges
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changes
. 1980 was the only year when
men
pessed
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passed
driving
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the driving
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test
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tests
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on
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apply
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under 30%
that
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which
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was the lowest
precentages
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percentages
percentage
of
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in
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50 years.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, test, precentages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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