The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar
cahrts
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charts
chart

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illustrate the
amount
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number

It appears that the quantifier the amount does not fit with the countable noun women. Consider changing the quantifier or the noun.

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of
women
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

and
men
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in someone Asian
contry
Correct your spelling
country

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who passed
theirs
Correct pronoun usage
their

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driving
test
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
Linking Words

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, the
precentage
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percentage

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of driving tests
pssed
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passed

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by
men
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were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was

It seems that the verb were does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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growing every ten years. Despite
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the
precentage
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percentage

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of
women
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

who passed the driving
test
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was

It seems that the verb were does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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slightly
hight
Correct your spelling
higher

The word hight doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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than
men
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

. The
women
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who successfully passed the driving
test
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in 1980 were just under 50
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

precentages
Correct your spelling
per cent

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,
that
Correct pronoun usage
which

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was the lowest
figures
Fix the agreement mistake
figure

It seems that figures may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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of
Change preposition
for

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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women
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in 30 years. After a
slightly
Change the adverb
slight

It appears that the adverb slightly is attempting to modify the noun rise. Consider replacing the adverb with an adjective.

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rise in 1990, there was
increase
Correct article usage
an increase

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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to the
hight
Correct your spelling
height

The word hight doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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point of a little bit less than 70
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Use synonyms
precentages
Correct your spelling
per cent

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in 2000, before a
little
Correct word choice
small

There may be an adjective issue here.

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decline to slightly more than 60
precentage
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per cent

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in 2010. In 1980,
men
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

's driving tests were passed by only under 30
precenatges
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percentages
percentage

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,
then
Linking Words

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in
1990
Add a comma
1990,

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase then in 1990. Consider adding a comma.

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the indicator
growed
Correct your spelling
grew

It appears that the verb growed is misspelled. Correct the spelling.

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up to just under 40
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Use synonyms
precentages
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percentages
percentage

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and eventually the
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precentages
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percentages
percentage

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of
men
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

rised
Correct your spelling
rose

It appears that the verb rised is misspelled. Correct the spelling.

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to the
hight
Correct your spelling
high

The word hight doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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point
around
Change preposition
of around

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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50
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Use synonyms
precentages
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percentages
percentage

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in 2000 and 2010 without any
chenges
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changes

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. 1980 was the only year when
men
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pessed
Correct your spelling
passed

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driving
Correct article usage
the driving

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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Use synonyms
Use synonyms
test
Fix the agreement mistake
tests

It seems that test may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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on
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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under 30%
that
Correct pronoun usage
which

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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was the lowest
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
precentages
Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage

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of
Change preposition
in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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50 years.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, test, precentages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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