The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes at the Pacific station in 1998 and present.
Overall
, it is clear that
the area udergone
significant changes including the platforms, stores Correct your spelling
undergone
such
as a restaurantand
a shopping Correct your spelling
restaurant and
center
.
In 1998, the platforms had four railway lines which probably offered more services, and Change the spelling
centre
also
the cafe and the ticket office were located in front of the rails. it seems people had to stay in queue to take
tickets.
Now, Verb problem
get
it is clear that
some remarkable difference
Fix the agreement mistake
differences
is
Verb problem
have
occured
in the platforms, one of the lines is eliminated and the restaurant and two shopping stores are suited Correct your spelling
occurred
instead
, moreover
, the ticket office was closed to thanks online websites which provide ticket
without Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
is needed
to go station for buying, but, the supermarket is built there.Wrong verb form
needing
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