The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table highlights the data about the volume of energy in
calories
from 1970 to 2010 in the United States of America. Use synonyms
Overall
, the total amount increased by the Linking Words
consuming
growth of every type of food. The most consumable meal was grains, meat, nuts and added fat, Replace the word
consumption
while
the Linking Words
last
one was fruit and vegetables.
As can be seen in the table, the total number expanded from 2165 to 2665. The biggest source of Linking Words
calories
went from nuts and animal products except milk. Their volume got larger from 465 to 480. Use synonyms
However
, people started to be interested in added fat and grain in 2010. Linking Words
That is
why the highest average belonged to them with 625 and 640 Linking Words
calories
in 2010.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the lowest place was taken by healthy food. The interest Linking Words
of
dairy products and vegetables decreased by 10 and 5, respectively. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
calories
of fruits increased by 15.Correct article usage
the calories
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