The charts below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 The charts below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of employed men and
women
who were 60 to 64 years old in four countries
including Belgium
, the USA
, Japan
, and Australia
in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, what stands out from these figures is that there was a decline in the percentage of working men in all four countries
. Among these countries
, Belgium
witnessed the highest and Japan
showed the least rate
whereas
there was a rise in the USA
and Australia
in terms of women
and the rest of Correct article usage
the countries
countries
Change noun form
countries'
country's
rate
reduced.
Regarding Males, in 1970, Fix the agreement mistake
rates
Japan
had the highest proportion of working males, which declined from 85% to 74% and remained at the top in 2000. However
, the rate
in Belgium
decreased to 19% in 2000 from 79% in 1970. Then
, the USA
and Australia
also
experienced a sharp decline in the rate
of adult employment from 73% and 76% to 55% and 47%, respectively.
Regarding women
, the USA
had a larger increase in women
's employment in 1970, which was 36%, then
rose to 39%. Moreover
, there was a rise of 2% in Australia
from 16% to 18% in 2000. Nevertheless
, Belgium
and Japan
witnessed a decrease which was from 8% and 43% to 40%. Even though witnessing a drop, Japan
stood top country among these in terms of aged women
employment.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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