The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The table chart illustrates information about the sales of restaurants in three different places in the year 2016.
Overall
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, it is crystal clear that
Georgia
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was the most preferable place among everyone,
while
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the restaurant on
Drake
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did not gain much popularity.
To begin
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with, the highest-selling item in three restaurants, was chicken items only
such
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as burgers on
Georgia
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, wings on
Dunsmuir
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route and pasta on
Drake
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Lane. Interestingly,
Dunsmuir
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st was always been ahead of
Drake
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but the value of their transaction was 4 dollars less than
Drake
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which was $5.61. Meanwhile, $10.69 was the transaction value on
Georgia
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Road.
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, on
Georgia
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Street, the number of Eat-in orders was nearly double that of
Drake
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(200) and only 50 more than
Dunsmuir
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.
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, take-way was 449, 392and 190 on
Georgia
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,
Dunsmuir
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and
Drake
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, respectively.
However
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, the number of orders was almost double from take-way which was 854 at its highest.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words georgia, drake, dunsmuir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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