The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The table chart illustrates information about the sales of restaurants in three different places in the year 2016.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that Georgia
was the most preferable place among everyone, while
the restaurant on Drake
did not gain much popularity.
To begin
with, the highest-selling item in three restaurants, was chicken items only such
as burgers on Georgia
, wings on Dunsmuir
route and pasta on Drake
Lane. Interestingly, Dunsmuir
st was always been ahead of Drake
but the value of their transaction was 4 dollars less than Drake
which was $5.61. Meanwhile, $10.69 was the transaction value on Georgia
Road.
Moreover
, on Georgia
Street, the number of Eat-in orders was nearly double that of Drake
(200) and only 50 more than Dunsmuir
. Additionally
, take-way was 449, 392and 190 on Georgia
, Dunsmuir
and Drake
, respectively. However
, the number of orders was almost double from take-way which was 854 at its highest.Submitted by k7jassu on
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