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Band 5.5

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam,
Last
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 week I came to London. When I stayed at the hotel I recognised that I
fogot
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forgot
 my
bag
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. İt was my fault I know but I need your help. My
bag
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 is green and it is small like a box. There are some special things
such
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 as my wallet, Credit cards, my home Keys ID card and my
pasaport
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passport
. I would like to
reaching
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reach
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 my
bag
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 so I would like you to find my
bag
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. If it is suitable for you, I can come to the airport when you
orginise
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organise
 the date. I have to attend for three days for a meeting. After that, I am free and I will be Okay for organising. Could you help
for
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apply
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me in
this
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 situation? If you arrange
this
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 event, I would be grateful to you.
Iam
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I am
 looking forward to hearing
a news
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news
a piece of news
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 from you. Thank
for
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you for
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everthing
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everything
.
Sincerly
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Sincerely
, Kevser.

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grammar
Make sure to double-check the spelling of words to avoid minor errors like 'fogot' instead of 'forgot' and 'İt' instead of 'It'.
structure
Try to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs for improved readability and coherence.
content
The letter provides a clear explanation of the situation and the action you hope the airline will take.
closing
The closing salutation 'Sincerely' is appropriately used, maintaining a polite tone.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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