The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts present the proportion of
time
an employed adult spent on various tasks. Use synonyms
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includes data from 1958 to 2008.
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Overall
, working adults spent the highest percentage of their Linking Words
time
working. Use synonyms
However
, in 1958, the lowest proportion was allotted to travelling to Linking Words
work
and in 2008 it was going out with family or friends.
In detail, in 1958, 33% of the Use synonyms
time
of employed adults was spent working and Use synonyms
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was followed by an adjacent 32% of their Linking Words
time
sleeping. Use synonyms
Also
, a ratio of 19% of the Linking Words
time
of working adults was done by going out with friends or family. Use synonyms
Moreover
, less than 10% of their Linking Words
time
was allotted to relaxing at home at 8% which was four times lower than the amount of Use synonyms
time
working. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they spent 6% of their Linking Words
time
doing other interests or playing sports, and Use synonyms
lastly
, the lowest proportion which was thrice lower than doing sports was travelling to Linking Words
work
with only 2%.
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Similarly
, after 50 years, adult employees still spend 42% of their Linking Words
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work
. Use synonyms
This
was again followed by sleeping with a quarter percentage. In comparison, Linking Words
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year, Linking Words
instead
of going out with their families, 13% of their Linking Words
time
was to relax at home. Equally, they spent their Use synonyms
time
doing other interests or playing sports and travelling to Use synonyms
work
at 8%. Use synonyms
Finally
, the least Linking Words
time
spent in 2008 was with their family or friends with only 6%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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