The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts present the proportion of
time
an employed adult spent on various tasks. This
includes data from 1958 to 2008.
Overall
, working adults spent the highest percentage of their time
working. However
, in 1958, the lowest proportion was allotted to travelling to work
and in 2008 it was going out with family or friends.
In detail, in 1958, 33% of the time
of employed adults was spent working and this
was followed by an adjacent 32% of their time
sleeping. Also
, a ratio of 19% of the time
of working adults was done by going out with friends or family. Moreover
, less than 10% of their time
was allotted to relaxing at home at 8% which was four times lower than the amount of time
working. Furthermore
, they spent 6% of their time
doing other interests or playing sports, and lastly
, the lowest proportion which was thrice lower than doing sports was travelling to work
with only 2%.
Similarly
, after 50 years, adult employees still spend 42% of their time
at work
. This
was again followed by sleeping with a quarter percentage. In comparison, this
year, instead
of going out with their families, 13% of their time
was to relax at home. Equally, they spent their time
doing other interests or playing sports and travelling to work
at 8%. Finally
, the least time
spent in 2008 was with their family or friends with only 6%.Submitted by cng123 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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