Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some undergraduates want to learn additional
subjects
to their main major, Use synonyms
whereas
others believe that it is more important to give their full attention and time to studying for a qualification.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of studying only their major. Linking Words
Firstly
, the undergraduate will give more attention and Linking Words
focus
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only their major they will Use synonyms
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on their studies and in the future they will have more chances to be successful, Use synonyms
however
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study
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to their education, they will learn their main Use synonyms
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poorly. Statistics show that, if Use synonyms
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focus
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, they will have more chance to be successful in their Use synonyms
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mathematics, because they do not need Use synonyms
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, there are some benefits of learning additional Linking Words
subjects
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, additional Linking Words
subjects
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, physics is needed everywhere and Linking Words
people
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skills
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moreover
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