The pie charts show the percentage of male and female workers in three employment sectors in two countries in 2007

The pie charts show the percentage of male and female workers in three employment sectors in two countries in 2007
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
men
and women across three different workforce stages in two countries for the year 2007.
Overall
, service dominates among males and females in both countries,standing out as the most significant,
while
the
industry
faces a notable rate in country B and
agriculture
rates a higher percentage in country A. In County A, there was not a significant difference between
men
and women. Service emerged as a leading sector with male workers constituting 56 % and female workers representing 49 %. A significant portion of
men
, specifically 29 %, are engaged in
agriculture
, which is approximately twice the percentage of males, involved in
industry
at 15 %.
Similarly
, female involvement reaches 43 % in
agriculture
,a figure
that is
around six times greater than in
industry
at 8 %.
Conversely
, in country B, the service sector
also
dominates and captures 65 % of male employment and 49 % of woman employment.
However
,
agriculture
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rate is alarmingly low, with just 3 % of
men
and a mere 1 % of women, working in
this
sector. Notably, the percentage of both employees' counterparts in the
industry
stands at 32 % and 11 %, respectively,indicating that male engagement was
higher
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three times
more
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than female engagement.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, industry, agriculture with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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