The chart below shows the proportion of business making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates information regarding the ratio of purchases including manufacturing, construction, wholesale and retail made by different Canadian businesses between 2015 and 2019.
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, it is crystal clear that Linking Words
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every sector was growing at its pace, no one was declining except Information and communications.
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To begin
with, the wholesale industry faced a continuous increase from 20% to 55% in its Linking Words
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Similarly
, construction had witnessed the same trend as wholesale but it followed a gradual increase. Interestingly, communication was the only area with the highest percentage even after facing numerous ups and downs, it remained at the top and hovered between 60% and 75%.
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, the manufacturing sector was the one with the highest number of fluctuations over the period starting from 30% in 2015 and after facing the incline of 20%, it reached 40% in 2017. Talking about retail, it surged from 30% to 50% in only one year, Linking Words
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, it ranged between 50% and 60% afterwards.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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