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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: ·       Give details of your visit to the restaurant ·       Explain the reason for the celebration ·       Say what you liked about the food or service Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#friends #restaurant #occasion #food #service #manager #visit #reason #celebration #addresses
Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
 message finds you well. I am writing to express my gratitude for the wonderful experience my friends and I had at your restaurant on 29th November. We gathered to celebrate my recent promotion, and your establishment played a crucial role in making the occasion truly special. From the moment we arrived, the service was exceptional. Our waiter was attentive and friendly, ensuring that we felt welcomed throughout our meal. The atmosphere was warm and inviting, which added to our celebratory mood. As for the food, everything was simply outstanding! Each dish was beautifully presented and bursting with
flavor
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. The sea scallops
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 a particular hit among our group, and many of us couldn’t stop raving about the duck breast as well.
In addition
, the dessert we ordered to share was the perfect finishing touch to our meal. Thank you for providing
such
 a delightful dining experience. We look forward to returning soon and sharing more special moments at your restaurant. Warm regards, Trang Dao
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task achievement
Your letter is well-structured and covers all parts of the task effectively. Each paragraph has a clear purpose and contributes to the overall task achievement.
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Consider providing specific examples to further elaborate on your points, such as mentioning the names or positions of staff members who provided exceptional service, or the specific flavors or presentation of the dishes.
coherence cohesion
The letter is excellently organized, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea, making it easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and warmly convey your feelings towards the restaurant, enhancing the personal tone of the letter.
task achievement
The overall tone is suitable for a letter to a restaurant manager, combining politeness with enthusiasm.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Celebratory meal
  • Exquisite cuisine
  • Attentive service
  • Culinary delights
  • Professionalism
  • Ambiance
  • Hospitality
  • Memorable experience
  • Gratifying
  • Praise-worthy
  • Acknowledgment
  • Cordial
  • Splendid
  • Enhanced
  • Savoring
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