You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. You should write at least 150 words.
The table provides information regarding
charge
of water supply in 5 Add an article
the charge
a charge
differetnt
cities Correct your spelling
different
of
Australia and Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
the datails
datails
of usage Correct your spelling
details
weather
it is less or more than 125 Correct your spelling
whether
kilolitre
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the average amount of money per household is more than 200$ whereas
, Perth has the highest amount with 332$ and Melbourne has the lowest with just 235%.
The usage charge up
to 125 Change preposition
of up
kilolitre
in Change to a plural noun
kilolitres
sydney
is more expensive Change the capitalization
Sydney
compare
to other cities Change the form of the verb
compared
with
0.98$ Change preposition
at
However
, Adelide
and Perth have the same and lowest price Correct your spelling
Adelaide
with
0.42$ per Change preposition
at
kilolitre
. It is interesting that same
price would be Correct article usage
the same
charge
in Sydney and Melbourne Wrong verb form
charged
weather
they use less or more than 125 Correct word choice
whether
kilolitre
.
People who have high water usage with more than 125 Change to a plural noun
kilolitres
kilolitre
and live in Perth are required to pay the highest charges with 1.50$ Change to a plural noun
kilolitres
while
people in Melbourne and Sydney would pay less
charges.Change the quantifier
fewer
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilolitre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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