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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The table provides information regarding
charge
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the charge
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 of water supply in 5
differetnt
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different
 cities
of
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in
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 Australia and
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the datails
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datails
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details
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weather
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whether
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 it is less or more than 125
kilolitre
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the average amount of money per household is more than 200$
whereas
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, Perth has the highest amount with 332$ and Melbourne has the lowest with just 235%. The usage charge
up
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of up
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 to 125
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kilolitre
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kilolitres
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 in
sydney
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Sydney
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 is more expensive
compare
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compared
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 to other cities
with
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at
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 0.98$
However
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,
Adelide
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Adelaide
 and Perth have the same and lowest price
with
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at
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 0.42$ per
kilolitre
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. It is interesting that
same
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the same
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 price would be
charge
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charged
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 in Sydney and Melbourne
weather
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whether
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 they use less or more than 125
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kilolitre
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kilolitres
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. People who have high water usage with more than 125
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kilolitre
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kilolitres
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 and live in Perth are required to pay the highest charges with 1.50$
while
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 people in Melbourne and Sydney would pay
less
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fewer
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 charges.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilolitre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cost
  • water consumption
  • billing method
  • variation
  • historical trends
  • outlier
  • price range
  • anomalies
  • regional factor
  • summarise
  • identify
  • compare
  • expensive
  • least expensive
  • main features
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