The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the
population
size
, birth
rate
, and the
Correct article usage
apply
death
rate
of
England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Change preposition
in
Population
size
and birthrate has
seen an Correct subject-verb agreement
have
increase
, whereas
death
Correct article usage
the death
rate
has experienced the opposite.
Apart from a slight dip during 1750-1800, the population
size
in England and Wales experienced significant growth, from around less than 5 million in 1750 to 50 million in 2000. It increased the most between the years of 1850 and 1950, more than quadrupling its size
. Birth
rate
, however
, has not seen such
increase
, experiencing both growth, during 1700-1750 and 1950-2000, and Correct article usage
an increase
decline
, in 1800-1950. Ultimately, Correct article usage
a decline
birth
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the birth
rate
increased from 60,000 in 1700 to around 70,000 in 2000. Lastly
, death
Correct article usage
the death
rate
only experience
an Change the verb form
experiences
increase
during 1700-1750. Ever since then
, the death
rate
has seen steady
decline, eventually leveling off in 1950 with a decrease from 50 thousand in 1700 to 40 thousand in 2000.
In conclusion, only Add an article
a steady
population
size
has seen a steep increase
, increasing almost
50 million. Change preposition
by almost
While
the birth
rate
has only seen slight growth with only a 15% increase
. Conversely
, the death
rate
has decreased 20
% from its initial data in 1700.Change preposition
by 20
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