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If we look at the details, one-fifth of the students in 2000 used to know no other language than English. Correct article usage
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Spanish was the most popular one, it experienced a 5% decrease in the number
of pupils from 2000 to 2010. The number
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speakers
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Finally
, the proportion of those who speak two other languages saw a mild increase to 15% in 2010.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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