The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The provided line graph depicts trends in the share price of Outokumu companies per euro from January 2006 to December 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that Outokumu prices saw some fluctuations during
the
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all 5 years
however
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, the best
prces
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prices
were
in
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the
begining
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beginning
of 2007 and in the middle of
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2008. In 2006 , prices were at 13
euros
then
significantly jumped to almost over 30 by the start of 2007 ;
however
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it saw a downward trend to almost a quarter
then
uplifted to 30
euros
by 2008. From the top of that , it rapidly
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to an insignificant minority
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, saw a small growth at 15
euros
after which it improved to over 15 but
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dropped
droped
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dropped
to almost 10
euros
at the end
of the year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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