The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The provided line graph depicts trends in the share price of Outokumu companies per euro from January 2006 to December 2010.
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, it is evident that Outokumu prices saw some fluctuations during the
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