Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Tuhin, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that you need some advice to play a new game in our city. My suggestion is to go
for
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Tennis.
This
game
required
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a huge physical activity,
as
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and as
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a
result
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result,
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your body will remain fit.
Moreover
, other sports like football, it doesn't require a lot of people. It means you can play with your
friend
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at any
time
you want. In Surrey, there is a learning
center
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centre
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called Surrey Cultural Center. I heard about it from one of my friends that they have a good teacher who will give you enough
time
and the cost is affordable. Not only that but
also
they have a lot of tennis courts available so you can practice at any
time
.
However
, as I am living in Surrey, if you want I can join you. I
also
wanted to learn
this
sport a long
time
ago but didn't get a chance to do it.
As
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you want to do so we can do it together
on
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apply
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every
sunday
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Sunday
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as a partner. No more today, I hope will see you soon All the best, Md Monirul Khan Haidher
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Coherence and Cohesion
The email starts well with the correct salutation and the purpose of writing, so keep up this organization.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on paragraph transitions to ensure each idea flows smoothly from one to the next.
Task Achievement
Clarify your ideas further, for instance, by explaining why tennis is more suitable compared to other sports.
Task Achievement
Provide a more detailed conclusion that sums up your entire message effectively.
Task Achievement
You provide a direct recommendation of tennis, supported by reasons like fitness benefits and convenience.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your email structure is clear with separated points: suggestion, how to learn, and the offer of companionship.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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