The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The six pie
chart
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charts
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illustrate the information about
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the used
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used
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use
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of
water
for three different purposes in the six different
area
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areas
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in the world.
Overall
,it is clear from the chart ,
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that agricultural
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agricultural
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agriculture
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had a large amount of
water
.
In
addition
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addition,
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the industrial used had the majority rate in Europe and North
America
.whaile
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while
the domestic used had
a
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the
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least amount of
water
.
According to
the charts ,central
Asia
,Africa, South
east
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Asia
and South
America
accounted for 88%,84%,81% and 71% in the use of
water
in
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for
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agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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.whaile it is least in both Europe 32% and North
America
39%.Industrial
used
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use
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had
a
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the
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least
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lowest
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precent
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percentage
in central
Asia
it is about 5%
wheares
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whereas
where
it had
a
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the
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majority used in Europe 53% and North
America
48%.
In
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other
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the other
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hand domestic used in South East
Asia
and in
the
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apply
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Central
Asia
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precent it
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percentage
is both 7%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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